tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post5348871906868237330..comments2023-11-03T06:21:14.560-04:00Comments on Auntie Mim's: HaikuUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post-29808798426903232862008-07-28T19:09:00.000-04:002008-07-28T19:09:00.000-04:00It reminds me of that fantastic William Carlos Wil...It reminds me of that fantastic William Carlos Williams poem which also started out as something pinned to a fridge door:<BR/><BR/>"This Is Just To Say" <BR/><BR/><BR/>I have eaten<BR/><BR/>the plums<BR/><BR/>that were in<BR/><BR/>the icebox<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>and which<BR/><BR/>you were probably<BR/><BR/>saving<BR/><BR/>for breakfast<BR/><BR/><BR/><BR/>Forgive me<BR/><BR/>they were delicious<BR/><BR/>so sweet<BR/><BR/>and so coldStevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08271504494780200087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post-89059119033936190462008-07-24T22:26:00.000-04:002008-07-24T22:26:00.000-04:00Chuckling over all the comments.Sounds like Walmar...Chuckling over all the comments.<BR/>Sounds like Walmart is going to be back soon to eat more spagetti.<BR/>You will need a pile more to fill it's belly. :)Cris, Artist in Oregonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15067969984221375853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post-74013085292547046942008-07-24T17:50:00.000-04:002008-07-24T17:50:00.000-04:00blog post supreme.blog post supreme.switchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07579655524956270544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post-14504075921604783722008-07-24T00:20:00.000-04:002008-07-24T00:20:00.000-04:00Omigod, I was going to call foul, but I counted my...Omigod, I was going to call foul, but I counted my syllables and was off one in the middle line. eeek.Debra Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13455047894767524091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post-88912203491009934702008-07-23T21:29:00.000-04:002008-07-23T21:29:00.000-04:00You all are too funny! this is great! I think I l...You all are too funny! this is great! <BR/><BR/>I think I liked the progression of 4 - 3 - 2 as opposed to the traditional 5-7-5, even tho' it was totally unintentional.Mimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12409455543895086283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post-33787562940302992162008-07-23T18:52:00.000-04:002008-07-23T18:52:00.000-04:00Some really fun poems here, none of which are haik...Some really fun poems here, none of which are haiku (sorry to be a stick in the mud). But Haiku is usually set out as 5-7-5 syllables for the three lines.<BR/><BR/>I ate spaghetti<BR/>Know that I will be right back<BR/>Right after Walmart<BR/><BR/>:) <BR/><BR/>Please don't shoot me now<BR/>It is part of the teaching<BR/>To the haiku poets<BR/><BR/>:) :)Terihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16029722057577018059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post-75197614782435773332008-07-23T17:42:00.000-04:002008-07-23T17:42:00.000-04:00Or,Been at the leftovers again?Get yourself back h...Or,<BR/>Been at the leftovers again?<BR/>Get yourself back here!<BR/>I thought I told you to go to Walmart!ElizThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05691208021622155317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post-22411054475914307002008-07-23T16:14:00.000-04:002008-07-23T16:14:00.000-04:00Or, 'I have burgled your house, will be back for t...Or, <BR/>'I have burgled your house,<BR/> will be back for the replaced electronics,<BR/> I am everywhere'ElizThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05691208021622155317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post-30196247621168807642008-07-23T13:35:00.000-04:002008-07-23T13:35:00.000-04:00who ate my spaghetti?who are you?where?who ate my spaghetti?<BR/>who are you?<BR/>where?soulbrushhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16879115279499153124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post-31013612761943681512008-07-23T12:56:00.000-04:002008-07-23T12:56:00.000-04:00Cute post and comments too. Yes, methinks you are...Cute post and comments too. Yes, methinks you are the next Basho.sukipoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09351851210507048174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post-86735239647594683092008-07-23T10:14:00.000-04:002008-07-23T10:14:00.000-04:00Eliz - you're right - is was a code..and it appear...Eliz - you're right - is was a code..and it appears that Deb has decoded the overall message.Mimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12409455543895086283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post-27544765309207622082008-07-23T09:16:00.000-04:002008-07-23T09:16:00.000-04:00It gives me a warm feeling, because it conveys so ...It gives me a warm feeling, because it conveys so much more than just logistics. I see two people who care about each other, simply touching base.<BR/><BR/>I am ok, I ate<BR/>Won't be here when you arrive home<BR/>Bargain prices call!Debra Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13455047894767524091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3706571093501032722.post-7569038486366697062008-07-23T05:34:00.000-04:002008-07-23T05:34:00.000-04:00Yes. I like the ambiguity; it could hold a comman...Yes. I like the ambiguity; it could hold a command, and Walmart could be code for your name. In fact the whole thing could be in code.ElizThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05691208021622155317noreply@blogger.com